My ideal person is called Zayelzy and she's my girlfriend. I think that she is my ideal person because she has everything I want.
My girlfriend is very lovely, so sensitive, so supportive, so intelligent and capable of doing a lot of things. I love her so much because she's always with me, in every moment; she's my confident in all of aspects in my life. My girlfriend is also so beautiful, so pretty for me; really, I like her a lot. She is very sensitive, because she has good feelings for all people; I like that because that is what makes her a good person, without bad feelings; a person very sympathetic with everyone.
My girlfriend is very lovely, so sensitive, so supportive, so intelligent and capable of doing a lot of things. I love her so much because she's always with me, in every moment; she's my confident in all of aspects in my life. My girlfriend is also so beautiful, so pretty for me; really, I like her a lot. She is very sensitive, because she has good feelings for all people; I like that because that is what makes her a good person, without bad feelings; a person very sympathetic with everyone.
She is very supportive too, and so intelligent; that is an important thing for me, because I can talk with her about things in common for both, and I think that is the most important thing in a relationship.
She has a lot of capacity for academic subjects and I'm proud of her, I'm really in love with her, she is my world, she is my reason for smile everyday.
She is just all I need, she is only the best in my life. These are my reasons to think that I found my ideal person, to think that her name is Zayelzy, and for that I'm very happy now and I will be happy all my life!
She has a lot of capacity for academic subjects and I'm proud of her, I'm really in love with her, she is my world, she is my reason for smile everyday.
She is just all I need, she is only the best in my life. These are my reasons to think that I found my ideal person, to think that her name is Zayelzy, and for that I'm very happy now and I will be happy all my life!

Hello Humberto,
ResponderEliminarplease check the following errors:
"and a person very sympathetic"
"the most important in a" = most important thing, element, etc.
"principal reason" no need for principal
"for smile" to smile
"for think" to think
"she names" her name is
The last paragraph is a bit confusing.
Your grade: 9