A special anecdote in my life

I have a lot of anecdotes in my life, some happy anecdotes, some sad anecdotes, some funny anecdotes and also some weird anecdotes. I think that I'm fortunate for that, and I think, too, I couldn't choose one of them to say that is the most important; but I have a special anecdote, maybe, my most important success.

When I was a child, I used to be a very dedicated kid to academic subjects, really dedicated. I think that now it's not the same because I have a lot of things to do and in the past I didn't.

Well, one fine day, when I was twelve years old, my teacher invited me to a contest named "Olimpiada del Conocimiento Infantil", the most important one in primary school. I said yes and I competed in that event.

Fortunaly, after some levels of the competition I won, and with me other five hundred students won that contest, to national level!. It was an amazing experience because I met a lot of people, including , the then President of Mexico, Vicente Fox.

Also I went to a lot of places, in D.F., for example Six Flags, or Union Congress, a lot of touristic places and cultural places also in The State of Mexico.

I think is a special anecdote in my life because, in adition to what I mentioned, that is the first time that I saw my parents so proud of me, really proud, and that is a beautiful experience for me.

Error Chart

Mistake	Correction	Reason
GRAMMAR
...But it got so much bad...	...But it got so much worse...	Bad is an adjetive and worse is a superlative
...and thought "I'd prefer die..."	...and thought "I'd rather die..."	Because I can't use a infinitive in this sentence
...so we have to wear the same clothes..	...so we had to wear the same clothes..	In the context, sentence is written in the past
Is your first visit to the U.S.?	Is this your first visit to the U.S.?	I forget write "this" into the sentence
READING
H	I	Because Daniel smokes and in Agate Guest House he can't smoke, and they find senior programs and Motel 6 have it.
WRITING
...names Zayelzy...	...is called Zayelzy..	Because names is a verb in the sentence
...very comprehensive with..	...very sympathetic with..	Comprehensive is a false cognate
...reasons for think..	...reasons to think..	That is a grammatic rule

My Ideal Person

My ideal person is called Zayelzy and she's my girlfriend. I think that she is my ideal person because she has everything I want.

My girlfriend is very lovely, so sensitive, so supportive, so intelligent and capable of doing a lot of things. I love her so much because she's always with me, in every moment; she's my confident in all of aspects in my life. My girlfriend is also so beautiful, so pretty for me; really, I like her a lot. She is very sensitive, because she has good feelings for all people; I like that because that is what makes her a good person, without bad feelings; a person very sympathetic with everyone.

She is very supportive too, and so intelligent; that is an important thing for me, because I can talk with her about things in common for both, and I think that is the most important thing in a relationship.

She has a lot of capacity for academic subjects and I'm proud of her, I'm really in love with her, she is my world, she is my reason for smile everyday.

She is just all I need, she is only the best in my life. These are my reasons to think that I found my ideal person, to think that her name is Zayelzy, and for that I'm very happy now and I will be happy all my life!